Platform

Here is my latest poetic creation for you to enjoy, or not... "Platform" Slow paces move : one forward / Wipe the eyes : smear the face / They wouldn't recognize : rigid features / Live on a platform : to exhibit life / Passersby never : an audience make / Movements- ever slight : do not garner glances / Stars go out : the silence shudders / Live in the rain : to melt away / ~Jeremy Hill *Live is used as a verb, not an adjective. **The system would not allow me to use my regular display, so (:) means end of a line and (/) means end of a stanza. There is no punctuation except after the word "Movements".